Chip and Dale,s picnic with Donald and Daisy

This looks as if you created it from scratch. I like that, when you don't suspect that it is a copy of something. The tree in the background of the large frame is great!

In my opinion it should be dark in Chip and Dale's hole, and the edge shouldn't be a single line - it should be several wrapped over each other to give the impression of a soft edge.

If you like, I can draw an example to show you what I mean.


Vision: I don't know what that means in these circumstances

Originality: Donald and Daisy have been on picnic hundreds of times before, but just making a whole comic page is original here on Deviantart.

Technique: I'm judging this by the same standard I aspire to do myself: publication quality. It isn't there yet, but still the drawings are pleasant.

Impact: All these things together made a quite high impact with me. I want to see the next page. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>